Nasenbaerr's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Medieval House]

wow that immage looks like you havn't any modeling skill (nearly evrything is made of cubes and cylinders and the trees are firs with cherry blossoms or somethings like this) and after the modeling you had no more pleasure to texture properly (the gras is far too upscaled and I never saw a roof made of that kind of woodenplanks also I think there are no bump normal specular displacement maps and all that stuff)
Sorry I know that I'm not the best 3d designer and some of your works are very good but I don't understand why you got such a good score for THAT work.

Lusin responds:

You are right. I have no skill. I'll quit 3D modelling now.

[The Martini]

The caustiks looks great but whith a good renderengin it isn't hard to do that.
and the modeling of a glas isn't very hard to do too.
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The olive looks like it is made of jelly because:
1. the green is too bright.
2. nearly nothing has a specularity underwhater because normaly it is whater that makes organic things shiny but underwhater... ;)
3. i think it looks like the olive has a SSS shader but olives donn't realy have.
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I think you try to get a cold effect with that blue light but it is a little too greenish so that it makes a hospital feeling.

Nanakisan responds:

Actually the olive is only phong shaded no SSS. As for the blue color that was the default color of the ground plane i used. I rarely if ever color my lights sometimes. I may think about that in the future however. Thank you for the critique!

[Adam&Eve - In the paradise]

The modeling is very good and the texturing is ok but the skinshader, the lighting and the enviroment is poor.
1. I don't know what program you use but if the program can do it you should use SSS for the characters.
2. No sun would throw such a hard shadow.
3. Please give a texture to the palm and use a bumpmap for the sand a specularmap for the characters and the sand near the whater.

[Living Room Render]

I think the scene looks generally good but it is over illuminated.
You can't measure where the light comes from and there are no shadows so the scene has no light dark contrasts.